Lorna Alkana

3 responses to “Holiday Memory [Draft and Revision]”

1. 

   exokotoks

   December 29, 2011 at 10:08 am

   I’d love to help edit this one – can’t read some of the red comments

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   exokotoks

   December 30, 2011 at 12:27 pm

   The dad in question says there is no ambiguity. “We all agreed to do it my way.”

3. 

   Alex

   January 18, 2012 at 11:57 pm

   “…and the answer was exactly what they had each proposed.”

   Pure genius