I’m not too happy with this one, but I had to finish a draft so I could move on.
I delved into the plum poem/comic a bit more then I should have probably. The man with the plums seemed to be on a mission rather then just satisified eating a plum or two out of the ice box. I rather enjoyed feeling left hanging at the end of the poem, and I believe that the comic 100% did that for me.. 🙂 now its like im writing the ending.
Lorna Phone 
I’m not too happy with this one, but I had to finish a draft so I could move on.
I delved into the plum poem/comic a bit more then I should have probably. The man with the plums seemed to be on a mission rather then just satisified eating a plum or two out of the ice box. I rather enjoyed feeling left hanging at the end of the poem, and I believe that the comic 100% did that for me.. 🙂 now its like im writing the ending.
Ashley
the purple tied it together