Balcony Time

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We survey downtown, looking for what all of the blimps and helicopters haven’t found yet.  We admire the changing colors of the sky and buildings as we spy, so as not to look suspicious.

Revised Text 11/13/12

We survey downtown, looking for what all of the blimps and helicopters haven’t found yet.

So as not to look suspicious, we admire the changing colors of the sky and buildings as we spy.

3 responses to “Balcony Time”

  1. exokotoks Avatar
    exokotoks

    “we admire the changing colors of the sky and the buildings as we spy’ – your words, here, are as good as your art…

  2. lornayespeace Avatar
    lornayespeace

    Thank you! I feel like I can still edit it down, though.

  3. Lobster McGee Avatar
    Lobster McGee

    Doo dee doo doo doo…being not suspicious

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